Coloring My World

In the U.S., there are 400 (made-up statistic) songs written every minute. Yet, unless you are Taylor Swift, you can’t make millions of dollars with your crappy contrived lyrics. There’s no doubt that there are some good song lyrics out there that will never make it to a karaoke machine, but the facts are that a hit song doesn’t need good lyrics. The lyrics don’t need to make sense to anyone. They don’t need to make sense to the songwriter.

My contention is that I can take any song that’s ever been written and tweak a little here and there and make it better. I’d be happy to take your lyrics and smooth out the rough edges. Send your worthless poetry to me and I’ll make you a star.

Here’s an example. I picked a short song because I don’t like giving things away for free. This, believe it or not, was a big hit for a “rock” band from the 70’s known as Chicago (originally Chicago Transit Authority). It’s called, and I shudder when I type this, Color My World. It has a flute solo, for Christ’s sake. Still, many are the young men that cursed James Pankow for only writing one verse. Slow dancing to Color My World guaranteed 3 minutes of “action”. Imagine what dragging six more lines out for 3 more minutes would have meant. Here goes.

Chicago’s version:

As time goes on, I realize Just what you mean to me. And now, now that you’re near, Promise your love that I’ve waited to share And dreams of our moments together. Color my world with hopes of loving you

My version has the much-needed second verse:

As time goes by, I realize Just what you mean to me. And now, now that you’re near, Promises of love that we’re meant to share And recalling our moments together Color my world with the joy of loving you

- Flute solo

As time goes by, I realize Just what you did to me And now, now that you’re gone, You shared your love with every one of my friends And recalling our moments together Color my world, you cheating floozie

So, send me your unrequited love songs, your “How could you do this to me?” songs, your anthems for your generation. I’ll add the perfect touches. Just give me a credit on the lyrics and I’ll take half the royalties.